Sunday, July 26, 2009

Hell Is Here Comments

Rating: 5.0

An airplane lands
In the house of the brave
Hope increases in the heart of the prey
But the hunter was unleashed again
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allan macli borges
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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 July 2009

Very good narration of a painful incident. Great skill you have.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 July 2009

Hell isn't what we want, but it'll come when someones ignite it, unleashing the Arena of Death.A well written poem allan!

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~ Jon London ~ 27 July 2009

A very vivid and touching piece Allen....you have written this well my friend...10++ keep up the good work

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Obinna Eruchie 27 July 2009

A poem with a vivid description well penned.

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Chitra - 27 July 2009

the stark reality of life...and its 'isolation' aspect so well penned

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 July 2009

Very heart-touching poem, Allan......10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Surya . 26 July 2009

again wonderful ideas and wonderful narration voted10 surya

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