Hell In Cell A, B Comments

a great read here nice and tight enjoyed

again, i'm immediately sucked into the details of this poem. little snapshots and images jump out. I read it extremely quickly and felt compelled to go back and look at it more slowly. I very much like the idea of getting a rushed first impression and then going back to consider the detail more thouroughly. Having said that, i didin't find that it has any particular flow that carries it along and it sometimes felt slightly disjointed. not a big criticism though as it's far bayond anything i've attempted yet so all credit to you.

This is outstanding work. I am sure that you are an exceptional person. Fred