Monday, July 20, 2009

Hell Corespondence Comments

Rating: 4.0

its said life's and counters are governed by fate
within the tangled threads of destiny
cursed flowers bloom
pitiful and frail
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misunderstood angel
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Wesley Mincin 20 July 2009

A few spelling mistakes but it was overall a good poem. I caught the point and enjoyed it. -Wes

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