Sunday, August 4, 2019

Hell.....A Dark Poem Comments

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I am new here,
I brim with sin.
Here I belong,
Here I fit in...
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Shaun Cronick
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Jane Campion 04 August 2019

The religious will love this poem. It expresses everything they fear. What always amuses me is the belief of being human after death. I would like to see a poem exploring this angle. Well imagined and executed. Forgive the pun.

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Shaun Cronick 05 August 2019

Thank you for commenting Jane. It's a bit uber- dark and cruel but what the, in for a penny in for a pound. The complete opposite to Guardian which I've amended and will reup tonight. Thank you again Jane and I enjoyed the pun.

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Shaun Cronick 05 August 2019

Thank you for commenting Jane. It's a bit uber-dark and cruel but what the. In for a penny, in for a pound. The complete opposite to Guardian which has been amended and will reup tonight. Thank you again Jane and your suggestion about being human after death is one to ponder. Thank you again Jane and I enjoyed the pun.

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Shaun Cronick 03 April 2020

Oh and great pun by the way.

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