Friday, June 17, 2016

Helix Nebula Comments

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In my mind's cradle, Time
Stencils a vast flowering of stars
In that lush pasture of our becoming.
How from birth's first explosion
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Tom Billsborough
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Seamus O Brian 07 November 2016

This is a truly brilliant creation. I especially enjoyed the contemplation of thought impulses as notes of a song in the neural pathways. Beautifully executed.

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Tom Billsborough 08 November 2016

Thanks, Neal. Will read more of yours later today. Still pretending to work this morning. Need more very strong black coffee!

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Sumit Ganguly 17 June 2016

Perception, thought, gesture and unconscious mind mapping the future- the beauty of the whole process is truly beyond comprehension. One of your best poems. Congrats.

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Tom Billsborough 17 June 2016

Thank you Sumit.It is a series about Consciousness etc. The Helix nebula is an incredible sight. It's on google images, by the way. Tom

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Kelly Kurt 17 June 2016

It is amongst my favorite Nebulae. The Hubble has delivered some awesome color enhanced images

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Tom Billsborough 17 June 2016

Sometimes it looks like a great beautiful eye! Hey, your Birds effort with Wes was really brilliant. your hummingbird definition exactly described my style of singing! Tom

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