Saturday, October 12, 2013

Height's & Depth's Comments

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Under the shroud of those sagged eyes
Tears too were crying
In the wheeze of his spirited breath
Even life was dying
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Dauntless Aberrants
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Valsa George 26 October 2013

On the Doom's day many unnatural things can happen! Sea may rise to the moon and moon may embrace the sea! A very intriguing write! Thanks for your beautiful comments! !

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Neela Nath Das 12 October 2013

A picture clear and vivid is drawn carefully.

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