Thursday, December 20, 2007

Hegira Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes
I doubt
there's more to life
than what meets the eye.
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David Kowalczyk
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Mark Mywords 04 January 2008

Not sure if the Spanish last line adds anything to the poem, or detracts by 'over-explanation' Perhaps ending it at 'as a child' would be more effective.

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