Friday, May 23, 2014

Heavy Summer Rain Comments

Rating: 3.5

The grasses in the field have toppled,
and in places it seems that a large, now
absent, animal must have passed the night.
The hay will right itself if the day
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Jane Kenyon
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Michael Morgan 15 November 2015

Magnificent poem, mostly. I'm not sure about the second theme, the Henry Adams bit. Does it work? Possibly.

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Colleen Courtney 29 May 2014

Why does it seem that the rain makes missing someone even more lonelier than when the sun is bright and shining? Love the last stanza of this poem.

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Jane Kenyon

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