Heavy Hearted Goodbye Comments

(cont.) .. i 'love': But whatever you were looking for I wasn't it. Our time together though was heaven sent. I'm going to be here but I'm not going to be blue. My heart is not hardened and my feelings aren't crushed....excellent. i mean your writing! ! BUT i would rewrite the last line! there is something WRONG about the wording. to MyPoemList. is it 'true'? bri :)

i'd say...and I dropped it .............oh, that could be messy! // i only 'recently' realized the difference between 'cement' and 'concrete': cement is actually an ingredient of concrete. Concrete is basically a mixture of aggregates and paste. The aggregates are sand and gravel or crushed stone; the paste is water and portland cement. (to continue) ..

I loved you and I wanted you to stay. But whatever you were looking for I wasn't it. Our time together though was heaven sent........i will not be hardened because of ur rejection..... a fine poem of determination....... do not make ur heart dirty. it does not help u...... thank u dear poet.. tony