Saturday, June 6, 2009

Heavenly Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hastened by the cold is winter dealing swiftly with denial,
Hatred forces mildly, hinting at mortuaries, and graves.
Heaving in tatters, filling the ambition, having awkward goals,
When does heaven display a folding and sorting of goals?
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Naveed Akram
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a beautiful and meaningful poem..10+++

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Marieta Maglas 06 June 2009

''Hatred forces mildly, hinting at mortuaries, and graves. Heaving in tatters, filling the ambition, having awkward goals, When does heaven display a folding and sorting of goals? '' very lovely poem, indeed..10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 June 2009

Thanks with 10+ for this lovely and happy poem.

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Naveed Akram

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