Friday, August 5, 2011

' Heavenly Night ' (Rondel Poem) Comments

Rating: 2.9

Ah, It was heavenly rare night
For spending with you in my dream
In such a compassionate scheme
You let my heart with such delight
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Ency Bearis
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Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. 03 September 2011

good rhyming scheme, could be turned into a song.

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Claudia Krizay 31 August 2011

Amazing! It flows nicely good rhyming, excellent choice of words.

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Inner Whispers 10 August 2011

rare thoughts for a rare poetess... Nice to read you again, ency!

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