Monday, October 3, 2011

Heavenly Hades Comments

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Jaded eyes grown tired of seeing
Battered body weary with being
Bleeding ears sick of the screams
Tortured mind, nothing’s what it seems
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Joyce Rugg
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Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 04 October 2011

Uh, Lady Your Highness, Your ingenuousness, are u sure you are 16? Really.... This is some serious stuff, waaaaaay serious, i mean i can't even critique it, i have to take more lessons first... Lol 'Convince myself destruction’s the key, A beginning in ending all I see Watch as the dust flies away I’m left alone, it’s best that way...' Sometimes a new beginning is the only way.... 'I’ve found a home, in the flames...' Is wise and of course we have to learn to conform and be in harmony with our trials.... Need i say more....

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