Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Heavenly Essence....... Comments

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Little did I know about the world outside,
till the time, i was residing inside,
under the shed of safety & the love of custody....
A lil' unknown to the things around me,
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Neha Aradhye
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Mula Veereswara Rao 02 June 2009

when compared with 'Love' poem Heavenly Essence is nice one and systematically built to climax. Keep writing.Pl.avoid repetition in poems which is observed in 'Love' poem. Please comment on my poems ' Mother', Made in India '

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Shagun Khera 24 May 2009

nice dediction to parents...

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Dhanesh Aradhye 19 May 2009

wel wel wel... m spechless & spellbound too... so simple n charmin and so so deep.. this a one of ur best i feel.. loved it totally... :)

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