Little did I know about the world outside,
till the time, i was residing inside,
under the shed of safety & the love of custody....
A lil' unknown to the things around me,
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wel wel wel... m spechless & spellbound too... so simple n charmin and so so deep.. this a one of ur best i feel.. loved it totally... :)
when compared with 'Love' poem Heavenly Essence is nice one and systematically built to climax. Keep writing.Pl.avoid repetition in poems which is observed in 'Love' poem. Please comment on my poems ' Mother', Made in India '