Sunday, March 12, 2017

Heavenly Drink Comments

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The drink was sweet that fermented within myself,
most of the time was passed in sleeping and dreaming its source.
I had nothing to do,
two kind hands did everything for me,
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Geetha Jayakumar 20 March 2017

A Beautiful poem fowing with loving words. Its the heavenly drink a baby drink with love. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 14 March 2017

A boy gets love first from his mother. Later as he grows up mother's love is superceded by a woman's love who comes to his life as lover and mate! Great write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 March 2017

though I was no more than an animal as I recognized her with her pleasant smell, .... nice presentation. Beautiful poem. Thanks sir.

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Nice expression as a new born child sir, beautiful! e 10p

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