Monday, January 2, 2012
Heavenly Comments
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sitten on island in the ocean
may seem kinda free
lying on a beach of golden sand
may sound as life should be
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7/28/2025 7:56:35 PM # 1.0.0
You need to use capitals wherever possible... I've rewritten your poem.- Sitting on an island in the ocean, May seem kind of free. Lying on a beach of golden sand, May sound as life should be. Sounds like heaven but it ain't heaven, No, siree. A billion waves of sea, you see, Divide you from me. Only you can make my world, Heavenly........