Monday, July 1, 2013

Heaven Was Always Waiting For You Comments

Rating: 4.8

You lived like a bird in full song
With a comforting and kind tune.
There were tough times when you became a wife,
Getting used to stony silences,
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Hazel Durham
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Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2016

A beautiful self-talk in a lovely style.....................................

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Susan Williams 19 May 2016

There is such a thing as a sad happiness, a smiling melancholy, and your poetry often seems to have an underlying aspect of this complex emotion. Maybe it is an Irish thing, breathed in from Irish air and Irish land. There just doesn't seem to be a division between human heart and the land that nurtured it in your lovely poetry.

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Achill Lad 14 October 2014

Another lovely poem, Hazel. What I like about your poems is that every word seems to come from the heart. you are able to communicate your emotions so easily. Well done.

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Thomas Carolan 04 March 2014

this poem is so deep from the heart and true sad you lived a life so true heavan was waiting for you, death touch each and and every home every moment in the world well done hazel

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Lyn Paul 29 December 2013

How beautiful with so many amazing lines. This Nanny has planted incredible memories.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 July 2013

Heaven was always waiting for you...Touching poem..with wonderful memories..

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Sayeed Abubakar 21 July 2013

Very touchy memory. My heart is utterly touched. Well written.

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Dave Walker 13 July 2013

A beautiful poem with wonderful memories.

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Heather Wilkins 10 July 2013

nice thoughts of yester years are recalled here. nice read

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Ramesh Rai 08 July 2013

it is pleasure to me u love poetry. so beautiful expression eloquent flow really praisewotthy. go ahead n if you may kindly spare a little time for me plz read my poems n comment. with regards n best wishes

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James Mclain 05 July 2013

It is true about good mum's and dad's. The lucky few know what they have. Sadly the rest do not until that day it comes....iip

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 04 July 2013

A nanny with a kind heart, a woman worthy to be praised this much A lovely write, full of love and emotion.

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Survi Sharma 02 July 2013

a great and memorable write just out of the world

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Sayeed Abubakar 02 July 2013

Excellent. A beautiful picture of a natural life. I like it very much.

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Soumita Sarkar 02 July 2013

Beautifully penned...........emotions alive till the brim.............Keep writing.

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Vishal Sharma 01 July 2013

nice title a poem with a nice figure in itself and a great scene created... words are crafted with great passion, a nice loving poem as always expected from you

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Paul Brookes 01 July 2013

What a beautiful poem of motherhood and nature combined I loved the first line of the last stanza Blue round eyes soaked in truth and your roots. I can see those eyes its so well written 10/10 BB =: OD

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Paul Brookes 01 July 2013

What a beautiful poem of motherhood and nature combined I loved the first line of the last stanza Blue round eyes soaked in truth and your roots. I can see those eyes its so well written 10/10 BB =: OD

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Gajanan Mishra 01 July 2013

live a life so true, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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