Monday, September 29, 2014

Heaven: The Paradise Comments

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Heaven is the place
Where I can take rest
Forever and ever
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Priyanka Gupta
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2014

Everybody wants to be there After surviving in the world of a lie.. good lines...10 Heaven is our belief That provides momentary relief If we concentrate on good things The heaven may be felt here as special thing If that is built in mind as concept It may need to follow with good act You then may have to lead simple life As mission and test every time the edge of knife

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 October 2014

Everybody wants to be there But not everybody attain it. One must perform good deeds here. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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