Saturday, November 24, 2007

{heaven Sent} Comments

Rating: 3.4

As I think of your eyes
To me its as if the heavens reside inside of them
The sound of your name such sweet intoxication
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Lillian Jamison
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Thad Wilk 25 November 2007

Lillian! Love this write! You do wonders with mere words! * 10 *! ! Thad

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 November 2007

Absolutely beautiful work, my dear.Interesting use of couplet stanzaec. Works well, as it paths its way to the lone, closing line...Solid, indeed. ~ ~ ~

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Lillian Jamison

Lillian Jamison

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