Heaven Sent Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Heaven Sent

Rating: 5.0


I saw a falling star,
From my window as I gazed,
Up to the midnight sky,
Such happiness it gave.
For I had thought of you,
Just at that very time,
For I am missing you,
It's presence so divine.
I felt it was a sign,
From you,
And I was glad,
To tell me you are fine,
Now I'm not feeling sad.
That precious falling star,
A gift from heaven sent,
I love you evermore,
For somehow things are meant.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 23 October 2022

The peace and serenity you feel is also felt by the reader. Thanks Jayne it's so beautiful!

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Jayne Louise Davies 26 October 2022

Thank you so much Nosheen for your kind comments x So appreciated x

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Nosheen Irfan 23 October 2022

Nothing can give the heart more peace and calm than some sign from the Nature. You have

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 October 2022

Beautiful write Top5 Kudoes

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Jayne Louise Davies 26 October 2022

Thank you LeeAnn x I appreciate your comment x

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Beautiful sight of falling star, expressed delightfully

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Jayne Louise Davies 26 October 2022

Thank you so much x Your comments mean a lot!

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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