Friday, October 23, 2015

Heaven's Weeping Comments

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Slowly, slowly Heaven’s weeping
For the children of the world
Who has evils that are seeping
Into Soul, and Simple mind
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Hanna Maria
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Howard Savage 08 January 2016

Great poem. I know if I created something and it turned out to be such as earth I would shed tears as well.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

love, care, forgiveness, peace, friendship. A Sweat word can stop, a raging storm For confusion fills their little mind ‘How can one, whom I have harmed Turn to me and be so kind? ’ thank you for jotting down the joys and struggles of day to day life. thank you. tony

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 October 2015

''I wrote this at a time when the people around me were always yelling and mad at each other.'' your note underlines that poetry is like an oasis of peace.. ;) Good, Hanna and.. keep on posting! Cheers

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