Sunday, October 11, 2009

Heaven's Smile Comments

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Down the day and down my mood
Time passed away but not to good
I walked and wandered, no where to go
I sought and searched, no one to know
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Deborah Downes
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Dot Loserr 20 February 2010

very cool and interesting poem, you can see it is well thought out and uplifting.

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Anna Malmenlid 11 October 2009

This was such a sweet poem! I loved the rhyming too :)

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Deborah Downes

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