Heaven's On Earth Comments
I am running back to the place
To the land where it all began.
You say that it's where I belong
Hell-bent to find the promise land.
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A lovely heavenly poem writen in a divine style! Thumbs up! Pls review my latest poem too.
Nice poem, but I think your last line is... well, forgive me, but weak. I'm a big fan of the hard edit, Leah. A minimalist to boot. Nice write.
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7/30/2025 7:22:34 AM # 1.0.0
The only way to travel to dance around the earth heaven on earth is how you make and by golly its just under your feet...like you want of him tome along...luvli to read