Wednesday, February 3, 2016

Heaven's Neighbors Comments

Rating: 3.5

After Victor Hugo


Death and Beauty, see how these goddesses cast
So much light and shade, a wise man might say
They were sisters, both bountiful, frightful, vast,
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Daniel Mark Epstein
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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 November 2016

Death and beauty, fantastic imagery displayed in the beautifully envisioned equally beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing and Congrats on modern POTD.

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Mizzy ........ 22 November 2016

Delightful read.....Lovely work!

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Paul Reed 22 November 2016

Great contrasts and vivid images. I like the 'bountiful, frightful, vast' in the first stanza and the last line is a perfect ending.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 November 2016

O luminous birds of the melancholy coast... Beautiful poem.... Thanks for sharing......

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 November 2016

Light and shade. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Daniel Mark Epstein

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