Heaven's Light Comments

Loved the phrase - 'heaven was putting on a show' this is uplifting work Tia, and reads aloud very well.10 from me. love Fay.

Wonderful piece- inspiring. Hopefully you continue to write

Carpe diem-very lovely.

In our daily lives we get side tracked by the normal daily running of life, and then something catches our eye, a falling leaf in the wind, sunbeams, stars, an ocean wave or even the smile on a young childs face and we gain back the significance of all around us. Those few minutes are priceless and full of wonder. your poem catches this, a worthy ten Chris

thanks... you have shadow my heaven's light... i can felt it as it glows it flow... it is all a whisper of moment that its the day... to remember that all are just passing scene...now is the time to wait the heaven light...thank you...a 10/10

this is a really lovely piece Tia and so very well written 10/10 regards Tom