Saturday, August 24, 2013

Heaven’s Gates Comments

Rating: 4.4

I cannot reach the apple on the tree
It is always too high for me.
I can never write that perfect poem
It always eludes me no matter how
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David Wood
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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 August 2013

Walking through the wood is a beautiful experience.

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Poetheart Morgan 28 August 2013

A perfect poem? For us poet i think is impossible. We are always seeking the perfection. Trying to reach the impossible. That is why we are Poets.

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Lyn Paul 27 August 2013

I believe there are glimpses of Heaven - just the pure beauty of nature. Always enjoy your sensitive words David. I think you set your standards way to high for you are most certainly satisfying your readers

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Heather Wilkins 27 August 2013

we are always reaching for something David. sometimes it seems impossible enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 27 August 2013

we are always reaching for something David. sometimes it seems impossible enjoyed

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 26 August 2013

A fine question with confusion.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 August 2013

rightly said perfection is unlimited skies and earth and ever on it attracts/ as someone wrote if there is heaven on this earth it is here it is here..it was about Kashmir...but applicable any where there is beauty glimpses of heaven we see ....beautiful poem with beautiful thought mind jerking thank

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Shahzia Batool 26 August 2013

So beautiful indeed...an arresting write...wish to quote all here! ! !

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Valsa George 25 August 2013

'Man's reach should exceed nis grasp or what's a Heaven for'? ! Striving is greater than achieving! !

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Sekharan Pookkat 25 August 2013

perfection-we can try for it without loosing soul

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Heather Wilkins 24 August 2013

a lot of important questions asked. somehow I feel a part of heaven is here on earth. just a feeling David good ink

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 August 2013

Heaven is here in this beautiful planet....But often it go unnoticed...and we go in search for heaven... Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 August 2013

Heaven is what we make of earth. Beautiful poem. Please see my new poem 'While Here' when you have time. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 24 August 2013

When we open our eyes here on earth, we can see things that we can imagine heaven to be like. A great poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2013

heaven we can see here, very good my dear poet, thanks.

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