I cannot reach the apple on the tree
It is always too high for me.
I can never write that perfect poem
It always eludes me no matter how
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A perfect poem? For us poet i think is impossible. We are always seeking the perfection. Trying to reach the impossible. That is why we are Poets.
I believe there are glimpses of Heaven - just the pure beauty of nature. Always enjoy your sensitive words David. I think you set your standards way to high for you are most certainly satisfying your readers
we are always reaching for something David. sometimes it seems impossible enjoyed
we are always reaching for something David. sometimes it seems impossible enjoyed
rightly said perfection is unlimited skies and earth and ever on it attracts/ as someone wrote if there is heaven on this earth it is here it is here..it was about Kashmir...but applicable any where there is beauty glimpses of heaven we see ....beautiful poem with beautiful thought mind jerking thank
So beautiful indeed...an arresting write...wish to quote all here! ! !
'Man's reach should exceed nis grasp or what's a Heaven for'? ! Striving is greater than achieving! !
a lot of important questions asked. somehow I feel a part of heaven is here on earth. just a feeling David good ink
Heaven is here in this beautiful planet....But often it go unnoticed...and we go in search for heaven... Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.
Heaven is what we make of earth. Beautiful poem. Please see my new poem 'While Here' when you have time. Thank you.
When we open our eyes here on earth, we can see things that we can imagine heaven to be like. A great poem.
Walking through the wood is a beautiful experience.