Heaven's Gates Comments

Hey Monica, I completely agree with Katharine, it is a beautiful poem and a good use of Old English

A wonderful poem about what heaven may be like. I enjoyed these lines especially: 'Golden sparkles embroiders the gate Of Wonder and Awe I wonder what is there' It brings such a nice image to the reader's mind! Well done!

Hi Monica. Great poem... I find it a challenge to write about heaven because there is very little we know about it... But I think it makes it even more exciting.. To not know exactly what it will be like. I can't wait to get to heavens gates so Jesus will greet me with a smile. Thanks for writing this. I rate it a 10!