Saturday, August 8, 2020

Heaven's Gate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Before the dusk consumed the dark and gloomy day
My soul had readied terrors for the night which lay
Ahead, and promised tortuous hours of sleeplessness
No rest would come; no peace, no happiness.
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L MILTON HANKINS
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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2020

Really a poignant bit of verse nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2020

Sleeplessness! ! Stress! ! ! Depression. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 August 2020

A truly superb sonnet. Beautifully written and well composed...10+++

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L MILTON HANKINS

L MILTON HANKINS

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