Saturday, April 7, 2018

Heaven On Earth! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once, someday in the morning,
I woke up early by mistake,
Something happened to me,
I went outside in my balcony.
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Pallavi Sarkar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2018

You woke up early at the morning. Something happened there and you had remembered. Little water droplets amazed mind. This was like heaven and you felt mind very Godly. Such a great feeling wondered you and brilliantly you composed this excellent poem with nice imagery...10

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