Heaven On Earth Comments

Nostalgic feelings of the good old school days are aptly captured in the poem. Rich flow of thoughts with captivating images elegantly brought forth with clarity of mind. A beautiful creation Heenal. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Every individual who has gone through this mill will later feel same way and reminiscing the days gone by would mostly bring tears to eyes, because they were so unique, thrilling, innovative, exiting, adventuring, accomplishing, notorious, and still innocent. Thanks for sharing the interesting poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD.

Hi Heenal, Congratulations on selection as poet of the day. And for this Lovely Poem, , , ,

a nice poem of childish goings on at a time when time seamed to stand still? ............well penned.

This is a very nice poem about early days in school. Everyone wishes to go back to that time of carefree life and masti all day long with friends. Thanks for sharing. Congrats.

Beautiful poem about school days Heenal. Congratulations on being member of the day. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

How nicely you can send back an old man like me to his past student life. Congrats and thanks as well for writing and sharing this beautiful poem.

good write...congrats on being poet of the day; can be polished further...

It looks like a running commentary on or a collage of interesting moments of school days we can easily relate to. Thanks for sharing the poem, Heenal.

Such is the life of teachers and students. Beautifully encapsulated in this artistic write. It would be intriguing to read a sequel. How some of those much maligned students turned out to be some of our leaders (both good and bad) . Congratulations on Poem Of The Day. Well deserved!

Homeworks not completed! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I terribly miss school days too.... congrats on being chosen.... a big 10 Heenal.......

Great write magnificent art, it seems everyone labels someone in some sort of way whether it's good or bad I find labeling in general to be bad but you have a way with words and I truly like this piece. Keep up the good work!

Nicely written...I liked it.

Real life, we used doing those things, Thank you for sharing.

study deep and too with full heart now it pays you in future

Focus on studies at this stage may be rewarding in the long run and it will also bring about positive advancements in every sphere.

A very blunt poem on school life; but remember apart from all these frustrations there are some moments to be treasured throughout your life.(irritating teachers above limits...Feeling of achieving awardWhen teachers say, 'Worst class ever seen') These lines brought a smile to my lips.some naughty ones must be there in the class.Anyway I really enjoyed reading and you have the talent in you.so keep writing my child.God bless