A place of wonder,
A place of grief,
Where float angels and demons.
Flowers n flames surrounding em,
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hey again, all ur poems hv gr8 mixture of tots....all very unique and stands for its title...i cant believe if u wrote all dis at the same age...one is matured another a little silly..and it makes a superb combo..u hv given life to all ur tots thru ur peoms..i observe this in ur poems...most of it deals wit man, his tots, his feelings and sort of..and u hv always an upper hand in this..u write 'em well...y don u broden ur imagination, ...take nature, worldly happenings, sort of..try them all..love ur poems...good luck! ! ! ... pls read ma poems too..hv a gr8 time! !
wow...! ! ! ! a wonderlfull work...grt going