Friday, December 16, 2011

Heaven Is Hell Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I walk down a golden paved highway,
The sound of angels song fills my ears,
I dance amidst the couds that surround me,
A vision of paradise stretches out before me,
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 October 2015

Verily, a lovely description........10

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Kim Barney 19 January 2015

A hauntingly beautiful poem, but you meant to say WERE MY CRIMES, not WHERE MY CRIMES.

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Amitava Sur 05 September 2014

A beautiful poem describing the intense longing for beloved with a lovely vision of love and peace. Thanks for sharing this.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 26 December 2011

Great poem, i enjoyed reading it.

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Crimson Love 25 December 2011

I dance amidst the couds that surround me, A vision of paradise stretches out before me, I breathe in life from all of my surroundings, I have died and become an immortal, Truly a phenomenal poem.

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Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

If love is here in this earth, 'twill also be a paradise! ! ! I love this poem! ! !

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Dave Walker 16 December 2011

Loved it. A great poem.

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Silentpoet Grl 16 December 2011

Amazing! Love your imagery! Really a beautiful poem! Every line is truly immaculate!

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