Friday, July 15, 2005

Heaven In These Limbs Comments

Rating: 4.3

There was a tambourine in your shoulder,
drums in your feet and a guitar in your heart.

You seem angry, little boy,
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Zoe Nyght
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Max Reif 16 July 2005

I think I see how it's organized: 2nd and 4th stanzas are some self-righteous 'elder' speaking. 1,3, and 5, the passionate, and defiant, lover(s) . Is that right? Lovely!

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