A leaf of the church calendar
Has just been torn
It revealed the month
And the date that I was born.
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Your Mother surely was a remarkable person.. A revealing poem of tender care. Thank you poetess.10++++
The sad memories of a lonely life passed with a sick mother has been so effectively painted by the poetess that the reader becomes speechless for a few moments!
You have endless memories of pain and suffering, the memories of your mother that she had ugly scars in her hand and atlast the heaven along with God. I quote....... I have tasted heaven Alone with God Everlasting happiness I have experienced Every moment I worked In His Honor. Brillant poem shared amazingly.10
A poem of deep feeling. Poignant but also uplifting.+++10
Thank you Celyfer for the comment and visit. I am so glad you liked it.
Thank you, brother for your amazing comment. It meant a lot to me.It touched my heart that you appreciated my work. Thank you for the visit.
A heart-warming poem which captures the hidden sufferance of humanity. Beautifully written.
Thank you for your comments, Mihaela. Your visit is much appreciated.
An amazingly revealing work, beautiful in every way imaginable, I have no idea if this is autobiographical but its soul rendering to read. The wording, flow and symmetry are fantastic, and the sadness is painful to read. I am glad that I found this poem to read. God be with you Rose Marie!
My heart leaps with utmost joy when I read your generous comments. Thank you so much, Kevin for taking time to read my poem.It was really an honor. May our dear Lord be with you always.
It is always a pleasure to hear nice comments from you, Bernard. Thank you for your time.
A good poem. Nicely penned.