Heaven In My Arms Comments

Stunning poem Alesia. Thank you for sharing

Nice poem Alesia. I like the way it builds up and leads into the last line.

The blissful and overwhelming experience of love well depicted in the poem. Indeed, love feels like heaven in ones arms. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up.

The joy and contentment, a happy relationship offers is so very evident in the poem! With the music of rain, our longing for the loved one's touch is more passionately felt. A poem quite romantic and sweet!