Tuesday, August 11, 2020

Heaven Help Us (Rhyming Double Sestina) Comments

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You are in my heartbeat and in my breath
and every though and little thing remind me of you
while God have brought our lives on the same way
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Varsha M 12 August 2020

Very detailed and explicit poetry a complete ballad sort covering every aspect with just one simple thing love of her. Thank-you so much.

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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