*** Heaven Can Wait *** Comments

Loved it....its a wonderful piece of art

enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing your art.

sweet and a reality based one..liked it much..well doen friend..10++++++++++++

your words are soft, tender and loving... I just love this..a great piece

From someone who has a deep appreciation of fine vocabulary, I love this piece, especially the first part. The are few writers these days who really get into the words they are writing and see them for what they are. you have done brilliantly. With respect, Abby

I lov ehtis poems probably one of my favorite right now. I hoope you keep writing becasue you are very good at writing!

i like....almost like a random old movie.....the love isn't bright, flashy, bouquet of flowers, diamond rings. It is appreciation of life, a partner, metaphors

im a fan! ! ! ! lol your words are nothing but beautiful!

heaven often waits for all of us except that some will never get there.I like your poem.I'm areal poet and since i; ve been reading poems on the web, i've not seen any like yours.keep it up.Lust could deceive us but heaven and love are interwined.write me: treasurenichola @yahoo.com

thats great :) keep writing

OMG I love it nice work you definitly have a talented gathering of words.

a very passionate poem, showing the depth of your heart, true writing comes from within and this is a truely inspirational piece

very good, writing, so from the heart, i love your writing, and can't wait to read more

Another excellent piece my friend, fantastic frantic imagery, I especially liked the layout used here it seems to add to the changing pictures very well, good job.

nice poem.. carrried me along till the end.. nice imagery.. i could almost picturise and actually see it unraveling.... great work. keep it up... have to vote this

WELL, MAYBE HEAVEN CAN WAIT, BUT WE, YOUR BELOVED/LOVING/ADMIRING READERS CANNOT WAIT TO READ YOUR NEXT MIND'S JOURNEY INTO THE WONDROUS REALM OF WHAT IS SO BASIC AND SO BEAUTIFUL WITHIN US. YOU TAKE WHAT COULD BE MUNDANE AND LIFT AND SCULPT AND IMBUE THE TRUE ESSENCE OF OUR NATURAL RYTHMS WITH YOUR GIFT OF PERFECT UNDERSTANDING AND EXUBERANT APPRECIATION. YOUR PASSION COLORS EACH WORD. YOU HAVE A RARE GIFT. YES, WE TREMBLE AFTER READING AND SHARING WITH YOU. THANK YOU, CAROL

I felt I was at the heaven gates wiht the love of my life well done

a space poem! I feel we have to read it loud at the milky way. very interesting!

What a great poem with multifarious lines of appostrophe. I quote the line 'warriors never say quit' and yes its true cos there is no finish to a war friend.

that was a really nice poem....feels very peace and romantic