*** Heaven Can Wait *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

*** Heaven Can Wait ***

Rating: 4.6


Zephyr emasculates mind fermented
Gem shimmers in you…
Gamma lantern blue
Hanging tough
Queen Mary’s chandelier……your stare
Glossing into my spines………..am paralyzed
Clouds of Reykjavik graying
Showers of Alpine ices, cooling…
Heart of me growing
Inching….
The days
I crawl to you…………on upper limbs
Safari’s wilderness clogging
Soul of me
What a life………..
You annexed my inner territory
Routing my defensive ………..seamless
Don’t ignore me
Even a glance
Baby you…come over here
The javelin and the sphere…..
You and me
Symbols of twosome spree
Warriors never say quit
Our rhythms flow parading the melodies
Confined
Listen……to the dreams
The husky voices…………….stimulate
We would never get a second chance
Should we…
Adrift too far
From the roof of Saturn
En route to Heaven
Oh honey…….so lovely
I just want to die in your arms.........
It’s all white……..famishing
As our love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brittany West 22 May 2009

I lov ehtis poems probably one of my favorite right now. I hoope you keep writing becasue you are very good at writing!

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Kiracakes09 . 21 January 2009

i like....almost like a random old movie.....the love isn't bright, flashy, bouquet of flowers, diamond rings. It is appreciation of life, a partner, metaphors

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Haleemah Mcmillan 16 January 2009

im a fan! ! ! ! lol your words are nothing but beautiful!

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Nichola Okoro 16 January 2009

heaven often waits for all of us except that some will never get there.I like your poem.I'm areal poet and since i; ve been reading poems on the web, i've not seen any like yours.keep it up.Lust could deceive us but heaven and love are interwined.write me: treasurenichola @yahoo.com

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XXxxKimberleyxxXX .. 12 December 2008

thats great :) keep writing

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Aparna Sinha 29 July 2009

Loved it....its a wonderful piece of art

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Gengis Capote 18 July 2009

enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing your art.

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Afzal Shauq 07 July 2009

sweet and a reality based one..liked it much..well doen friend..10++++++++++++

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Meggie Gultiano 01 July 2009

your words are soft, tender and loving... I just love this..a great piece

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Abby Mackaway 12 June 2009

From someone who has a deep appreciation of fine vocabulary, I love this piece, especially the first part. The are few writers these days who really get into the words they are writing and see them for what they are. you have done brilliantly. With respect, Abby

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