Heaven and hell.
Two good words.
Heaven as loving as a mom.
Hell as dark as the midnight sky.
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I suggest you not ty to define heaven and hell Much of both is already on forsaken Earth Since you're quite young, inspire to write of real feelings for Love and Happiness, Do stop and smell the roses and do some good deeds. Request less of other poets and write for your own self. Sort of like a diary. Keep it a secret and your will someday, be very happy to share it with everyone. Your life is one of a kind. Love and live it. Hope my comment helps. ...louie
Let Mom remain mother cow and let the moon remain atop...you have a flair with your words i believe...keep posting your writes Emoly