Heaven Among Roses Comments

I enjoyed the way this poem flows... and the topic lends itself to a warm, tranquil reading. Your vocabulary compliments your devices, as well. Heaven on earth can be this easy... forget the mediocre eye.

a sonorous poem...profound and ethereal all through

i give you 11 out of 10.1 extra for the hidden message

to me 'heaven among roses' is an image of 'relationship- the presence of man with rose (female) is like heaven'. the experience of balance between nature's law...

nice poem, but try not to repeat the same word in the same paom and directly after each other: aspire and aspiration

Let quote here - 'Love is much like a wild rose, Beautiful and calm, But willing to draw blood in its defense.” Such is the vivid description of Rose Its really amazing to fantasize From all the angles you see this rose. Wonderful is the feelings felt. Smooth flow of a gigantic river This is so good to read and feel.

The structure of your rhyme works extremely well in this beautiful sonnet. The rose is the perfect flower to be focused on in a sonnet. You have crafted this piece with love and passion. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

It can be composed as a good song by a fine singer and music conductor. Good song poem. Enjoyed. Thanks a lot.

You can add a melody to this one. Just write write write write. Well done Rhyming to poetry is like fish to sea The more it rhymes the better it will be

it sounds like a song......beautiful song.........i liked the rhyme.....good job..keep on writing and show us more! ! ! !

as i have observed, this is beautiful...it rhymes...the thought derives from the title..total evaluation is 10..grace

You must enjoy roses as much as me. Thanks for getting in touch.

excellent indeed! I liked the closing rhyme scheme as aabbccdd.... 10+

Thank you for your invitation to read. I love your titles and when I have time, I will be reading more of your works. This poem is very powerful. You have good strength in your words. I will read more later. Please read something of mine too? Thank you, Deborah Cromer

greate work dear sir. the rhyming is there...at first i thought you are doing a sonnet but in the few last lines were not on the standard of abab, cdcd, efef, gg... but i would say your work in beautiful. i like it

wonderful lyric poem, well written..10+++ from me