Heaven Comments

The one you say I in this poem is an endangered tribe. very nurrative showing your thinking power. a lot of grammer mistakes found, better checked all your writings be edited before email book.

YOU R A GREAT THINKER

Dear Pal, I read your poem Heaven. It is your mind and what it has to offer to the world. If all people in the world think this way, I am sure, there won't be any trouble in this world. Thanks for your comments on my poem. I am not an established writer though. Your friend, sasivellat