Heaven Comments

Perfect selection of diction. perfect poem.

its nice sweet poem

I am glad that you 'temporarily' found your love.

Beautifully rhymed, sounds classical...........extraordinary imagery.......well created.

Poetry is there every where.....when the heart has began the search.........heaven will grace your foot steps!

Hey Girish, comeon dont be so modest--, nothing much has been edited by me its all your efforts--- so heres wishing you all the best in that search for HEAVEN A++++and 10+++++++ love anjali