Heaven Comments

can this poem be used for a class

amazing, its a beautiful poem

Sounds like a song from an old Wizard of Oz cartoon show: The streets are paved with gold, /And no one ever grows old, / In a wonderful land called the World of Oz. Not worthy of the poem of the day.

Nice poem. Congrats on Poem of the day. I would suggest you make it even better by fixing a few minor errors so that it looks like this: Heaven, where the streets are made of gold, Heaven, where you never age or grow old, Heaven, where life's secrets unfold, Heaven, where the secrets are told, Heaven, where flowers grow wild, Heaven, once again you're a child, Heaven, the weather's always warm and mild, Heaven, where wings lie open in piles, Heaven, where we are free, Heaven, can't you see? Heaven, it's for you and for me, Heaven, when we are free.

I wonder at the guess about heaven the poet write here!

Wonderful landscape of heaven painted through innocent thoughts and imagery: it's an ideal place to live in the blissful freedom. Thanks.

.........nicely written, congratulations on member poem...thank you for sharing ★

WOW! ! ! you have done it nicely :)

this is a very beautiful poem and i absolutly love it. Heaven is s part of freedom and a place to feel better about who you are because Jesus picked YOU to enter his gates of heaven. Love Jesus Love the Lord Lidia

I love this poem because, this is exactly what i think aobut when i think of heaven. Except it doesnt ryhme. Every line in the poem gave a vivid detail of what heaven is going to be like. great job. Keep the poems coming. People need to hear more inspirational poems like this.

I love it... ^-^ can you read some of my poems and rate and comment them? Thanks!

Wonderful absolutely wonderful

its true this poem is an inspiration and it gives people something to look forward to when they die so they wont be scared because when you die your suposed to be happy because your going to live with the king! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

I loved the poem because it was true.

This poem was a beautiful piece of poetry and I can now see what heavan will be like when I die. Fantastic writing! Keep writing

true, realistic, future, our home.. where there is love, smiles, no haters, all in one, peace, n all free! ! ! !

warm and soft poem loved it a lot love and care iyan xxxxxxxxx