Heaven Comments

I love this sweet child myself.

" I love you mommy! ! " Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Most beautiful poem it is.so nice poem. Thanks for sharing your poetic thoughts.100++++++++

An interesting was to tell a story. I enjoyed reading this.

A very unusual and unique way to portray the questioning voice of an innocent child... very effective. Very well written.10+

But mommy; Do you love me as I do? ? A deep silence Tears ofquestions flowsfrom eyes Again A deep silence says the rest. - - - - A powerful poem on mother child relationship.The child wants the mother to give him all the love.Even mother's assurance does not satisfy him.

Very strong poetic themes: Mommy and Heaven.

sorry I am half Blind on my laps top we don't get BOLD caps I meant first letters only thanks UR INDEED a good and better poetess God bless I am just learning only

I comment ONLY when I want to help Your poem is very good if only you can Edit it I am an International poet adviser OF ONLY ENGLISH POETRY 'If you can only reduce repetition and some detailed edit like why all caps etc then this poetry can be one of your tops.. rest ur a good poetess and judge I got kicked for 6 six years now i am First

No my child, you are my everything Mommy! ! Mommy! ! Don't be sad I love you mommy! ! You are my whole world mommy......wonderful imagination dear Archita. questions and answers. mother and child. God and heaven and your daddy. it is a wonderful world. Ma ygod bless your world. thanku. tony

Tears ofquestions flowsfrom eyes Again A deep silence says the rest... Very nice poem dear poet...