Heaven Comments
A huge gate that never opened
Still no rust, no dust, upon its
Iron grills of angelic figures.
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this poem - an invite for travelling! and you give hope for a happy end!
beautiful words............ Standing patiently infront of it I shouted everyday my name, Yes I add to it: Oh, Lord I am here, here my cry......................
Outstanding, brilliant and very innovative...................100 on 10...........comparison is par excellence. “Make your heart kind like wind And no bar will resist you to enter.”
True and honest soul always finds the path to the Heaven.Very nice.
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8/1/2025 4:59:56 AM # 1.0.0
We should all aim towards heaven! With the muse of moral works. Nice piece.