Heaven….. Comments

This is a favorite of mine (as far as love poems) . The idea is simple and to the point but still wonderful. Thank you for sharing this with me :)

Heaven seen in her eyes… spilling love/oozing love/sousing love all elements you’ve painted in very romantic way…sure ‘Marriage Registrar’ will boot your marriage…lol… Rose seller was catalyst in poetic/romantic progression…succulent…. Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS marriage takes place in haven...but love in earth… thanks for sharing n

Except for a bit of grammar...the poem is brilliant, and as pure as love is 9/10

:) a good write :) if only love was that simple :)

Simply beautiful-[I saw heaven in her eyes, I don’t know with her how my heart got tied…..] how do you get these lovely expressions!

You bought the roses, The little boy prayed, You got your girl.... Nicely crafted. I like it Rgds Nooruddeen

Heaven in her EYES.... I am in love with this line...A masterpiece... how did u manage to think from a guy's point of view./...? ? ? You rock...I wish I could write something heavenly like this...Brilliant

Dear Anita, And her scarf come flying to me; such beautiful heaven god had planned. She came to me to take her scarf, Our eyes meet each other making our soul one part. Was it a vision? symbolic about the inner longings of a relationship we need with the heaven. you poetess bring it out in the symbol of a scarf falling down from heaven. A little boy told me “brother please buy these roses I need some money.” He told that “I’ll pray for you to meet your honey.” is it when u gave a poor boy money by buying the roses, that u got the gift of meeting the heavenly being again? ? do u know anita, you are preaching here selfless love and the joy of giving. keep it up. a poetess has so much to convey in this world to make it a better world.