Sunday, July 1, 2018

Heatwave Comments

Rating: 4.9

A heatwave is sweeping across this land
As we drive along Carlow's country roads
Listening to Black Sabbath such a talented band
I have a sense of our unbreakable togetherness even with our heavy load.
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Hazel Durham
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Bri Edwards 11 August 2019

a truth about marriage (some at least) : " With challenges and arguments even with the bluest skies above" , but hopefully also " We will bask in the heatwave of our love" . if you get burned, there ARE always Irish divorce lawyers willing to offer an (OPEN) hand. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2019

We have discovered at the end of every country road There is the promise of our eternal love With challenges and arguments even with the bluest skies above We will bask in the heatwave of our love....touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem is shared amazingly.

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Mihaela Pirjol 24 September 2018

This poem takes the reader on a journey of music, summer joy, love, hope, anticipation of possibilities, and the beauty of Nature! Black Sabbath...oh, yes! With such music, everything is possible! My favorite is their song ''Changes''! ! ! An extraordinary poem, ardent with beauty and emotions!

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Khairul Ahsan 11 July 2018

A poem of love and happiness, a poem of fulfillment. Loved the passion that flows throughout the poem. If it is truly written from a personal experience, wow, congratulations on your new found love!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 July 2018

You are oozing a sexual magnetism A vibrant sensuality Of the male power of attraction and mentality I feel the bond we have swimming deeply in my soul... AND it lasts till winter comes and summer's past

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 July 2018

THE heat wave comes once in a way natures way to teach you how to be brave avoid dehydration have a cool drink too water in plenty take along with you when you may need it but not find it one never has a clue life it could save it if you had listened poet me too take care will you

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Valsa George 02 July 2018

I feel so happy for you Hazel.....! You have found your real love and have bid adieu to your unhappy past! When heart is filled with love, even the tumbling hedges, brambles and briars will reflect an unusual loveliness! Let the heat wave of love permeate your body and consume you altogether! Beautiful ......!

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Khairul Ahsan 11 July 2018

Loved your comment, Valsa! Excellent!

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2018

We have discovered at the end of every country road There is the promise of our eternal love.......beautiful poem. sensual. facts of life and attraction and above all love...... thank u dear poetess for this fine poem. tony

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Bill Cantrell 01 July 2018

Wonderful poem! I played war pigs and paranoid on my guitar countless times, , , great rock for sure! ! A promise of eternal love is something wonderful indeed!

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