A breath of fresh air
Goes straight to my head.
Wild scents, sharp sounds
Not muffled with snow.
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What a lovely poem Julia. Really enjoyed reading this. Lizzy.x
I wanted to spin and whirl and dance too. Beautifully written full of joy!
I loved this Julia - wonderful pace and rhythm with a lovely refrain. The opening line set the tone beautifully and swept the reader along from one delightful image to another. Kind regards, Justine.
Lovely poem. I love Spring and swimming. It brings the heathen out in me also!
So earthy and passionate. Made me want to take my shoes off and run twirling into the grass! Hugs Anna xxx