Heat Wave. Comments

when i saw the title i remered the movie 'sister act'.. there was a song by that name.. it hink............ anyhow......... thsi my dear fay is excellent... you teach me well.

You describe the indescribable with taste and finesse. There is something of the 'sonnet' feel about this, too, which is interesting, as it is only ten lines in length. The final couplet is especially fine - a tribute to your love of language. Excellent poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

how can you craft such a beautiful and profound masterpieces always my friend? ? ? great work! ! ! 10

Hot stuff Fay, must be your latest flame,10 from Tom

fay good one i think you have enough fire