Sunday, July 8, 2018

Heat And Water Are Twins Comments

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The heat wave comes
once in a way
natures way to teach you
how to be brave
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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 July 2018

Such a well penned poem....10+++++

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Rajnish Manga 09 July 2018

....free of cost through out the day during summers. Even, passengers on trains were served with water at all stations en route. The poem, interestingly, puts across an important message. How a person with empty pocket will manage water to drink?

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Rajnish Manga 09 July 2018

Once again, you have shown us simple truth behind everyday life situations. There was a time when, a decade or two ago, we could see permanent or temporary booths installed everywhere by social service groups or philanthropists with a man sitting there to serve cool water....

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 July 2018

times have changed i posted comments on ur poem about wrong date of birth yet god gave promotion like wise some one will improve the situation thanks my comment god removed it i think i am a simple minded man try to teach fundamentals when i can its duty of all who are human but many shirk quirks

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