Heartwood Poem by Zyw Zywa

Heartwood

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I came for you, not for the wood
that you make me touch, polished
with a goldjointed split here and there --

the simplicity-beauty
of the song of time on the lute
of life, your life

You show me the snaps
and stretch the evening, you stretch yourself
to the goodnight in the hallway

In the guest bed, I caress the wood
of your heart, so much do I want
to make it burn

not to sleep alone, not patiently
wait, but start the future
which you are now dreaming

great, not patiently wait
until you want me, I want to love you
at first sight

Tuesday, July 13, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: simplicity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'Norwegian Wood' (This Bird Has Flown) (John Lennon, The Beatles,1965, album 'Rubber Soul") --- Wabi-sabi = Simplicity-beauty, namely of wear and tear; acceptance of transience; you can safely show the scars of your life --- Al-'Oed = the wood, the lute --- Collection 'Lilith's Powers' #113
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis A. Estable 13 July 2021

First, touch should be in the past tense to agree with polished and the accord of the verse. The rest of the poem lacks logical meaning. It is a bit confusing in what it tries to convey. The lines are sloppy put together.

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